I’m excited to share a link to my interview with the Florida Writer Podcast. We talked about my books and writing. Enjoy!
Also available as an Apple Podcast.
I’m excited to share a link to my interview with the Florida Writer Podcast. We talked about my books and writing. Enjoy!
Also available as an Apple Podcast.
Blogger and fellow WordPress user, BookWorlder, posted the Press Release and my Author Q&A for Midnight House! Click the link below and check it out:
I’m excited to share my first book review for Midnight House from the Chico Enterprise-Record‘s Book Columnist, Dan Barnett! Click below:
I’m excited to announce that Midnight House by Ian Dawson is now available on all platforms today! Buy now on BookBaby, Amazon, Apple Books, Barnes & Noble, and Target.com!
Amazon eBook links below!
Click below to buy the Midnight House eBook on Amazon!
And get the eBook of The Field by Ian Dawson on Amazon below!
Or, you can…
Last week, I talked about getting feedback, finalizing your manuscript, and getting it ready to publish. In this final post about the process of publishing Midnight House, I wanted to touch on the indie publishing process, marketing, and other aspects of getting your manuscript out in a professional form.
Let’s get started!
To Self-Publish, or Not to Self-Publish…
Your hard work has paid off. You have written, edited, and copyrighted your manuscript and are ready to move to the next step: publication. Here, you can go one of two ways: traditional publishers or independent publishing.
If you go the traditional route, you’ll want to craft an eye-catching query letter that hooks the reader, and hopefully, you get a request for your manuscript to be sent for review.
If you go the independent publishing route, you are in control of the publishing process.
I went independent for several reasons with The Field and Midnight House:
Now, the downside, of course, is that it does cost money to self-publish. I recommend you do your research and find a publishing company that fits your needs and your budget. Many have packages for just eBooks or for an eBook/paperback bundle.
I cannot stress this enough: Make sure if you invest the money to self-publish that you have a plan in place to pay yourself back via your 9 to 5 or other income. Being an independent author is great, but don’t expect to make Stephen King money with your first novel.
Author Dan Brown had written three novels before the DaVinci Code. After that hit big, the other three became bestsellers.
Be patient, keep writing, and don’t get discouraged.
Sometimes You Should Judge a Book By Its Cover…Especially If It’s Yours
If you do decide to self-publish, many publishing companies offer in-house cover art services. If you wish to seek out your own cover artist that fits your stylistic needs, I recommend checking out my post on the topic, Finding a Cover Artist.
It’s a Team Effort, But You’re Coach
Once you’ve taken the leap to publish independently, keep in mind that you are the boss. You are in control and give final approval to every aspect of the publishing process. It’s essential to be engaged, respond quickly to any questions the publisher may have, and don’t be afraid to ask any and all questions before and during the process. This is a financial investment on your part, so making sure things are exactly as you want them to be is critical.
I highly recommend keeping all correspondence upbeat and positive with everyone you are working with throughout the process. As Team Coach, you set the tone, and you have to make sure all parties involved stay focused and motivated to create a great final product. If you have issues with something, inquire nicely—no need to be an egomaniac or a jerk. Everyone has the same goal: to get your novel professionally published and out to the world.
When each step is complete, take the time to email those who helped you and thank them for their hard work and assistance. A little professional courtesy can go a long way, especially if you plan to use the same cover artist or publisher again in the future.
Have I Got a Novel for You!
Marketing starts with you. You control the message. You control what people initially know about your book. You are the point-person when it comes to getting the word out.
Utilize your social media and let people know you have a novel coming out soon (I recommend you start putting the word out six weeks before the book comes out). Post the cover. Post the blurb from the back of the book. Work on generating interest among people you know who can help get the word out to others.
But you don’t have to stop there.
If you desire, you can work with a marketing firm that specializes in independent publishers. They can help you craft a press release for your book and get copies in the hands of book reviewers who can help get the word out about your novel. A marketing firm can target a specific market and demographic for your book to reach the right people who can help sell your book.
This, too, costs money, so budget accordingly.
The key here is to get your book in front of as many eyes and ears as possible. When the book is released, there will be buzz about your book online, with reviewers, and hopefully, you can snag an interview or two to talk about your book.
Writing a novel, a non-fiction book, a screenplay, a play, and any other creative work takes time. It truly is a marathon that requires hard work, dedication, professionalism, focus, and energy to get to the final stage of the product’s release. I’m very proud of my independent publishing team’s work on The Field and Midnight House. And when you get that box of paperbacks in the mail and open it and see a book’s cover with your name on it, it really is a thrill.
I hope this five-part series was helpful to you and will help you on your publishing journey. If you have any questions, please feel free to leave a comment, and I will get back to you.
Happy writing, and happy publishing!
Midnight House by Ian Dawson will be out in one week on March 30, 2021! Get your paperback copy through BookBaby using the info and Promo Code below.
And don’t forget to get The Field by Ian Dawson, too!
Last week, I talked about the drafting and editing process I went through while writing Midnight House. Needless to say, this part of the process takes time and should be taken seriously by anyone with an eye for publishing their novel. The more professional you take the process, the better the result.
This week, I wanted to talk about getting feedback, finalizing your manuscript, and getting it ready to publish.
An Objective Outsider
Your manuscript is complete. You’ve done multiple drafts. You have painstakingly gone through each sentence, paragraph, and chapter to make sure they help tell the story you want to tell. Now it’s time to let someone else read your work.
Finding a feedback partner is crucial to getting effective and objective feedback on your work. Ideally, this should be someone familiar with your work, someone you trust to give you honest and constructive feedback, and hopefully a non-family member.
I was fortunate enough to have a former co-worker become my feedback partner for Midnight House. He was one of the first people to buy The Field, and he really enjoyed the book and the characters. When I asked him to be my feedback partner for book two, he was more than happy to help.
If you have a few people in mind who haven’t read anything of yours, put some feelers out and see if they would be willing to read the first few chapters and give you feedback. If one gets back to you with the constructive criticism you need to make the book better, you should consider offering them payment to read the whole manuscript.
Yes. You should pay someone for their time when it comes to reading your manuscript. This helps to ensure they won’t put it off, and it gives them an incentive to get back to you with their feedback.
You also want to make sure that you give them specific things to focus on so they have a goal in mind as they begin to read. Do you want them to focus on the main character’s story arc? Do you want them to check for story continuity? Is the book too graphic? Is there anything that could be cut that slows down the pace of the story? Giving your feedback partner something to actively be on the lookout for will help them stay engaged.
Once they have finished, schedule a phone call, Zoom meeting, or face-to-face (if available in your area), and let them speak first. If they have questions about things that were unclear, make a note of them. What did they like? What didn’t they like? What stood out to them? What wasn’t effective? Make sure you take notes and also ask them for any notes they may have written down as they were reading.
All of this is valuable information.
Remember, they are not attacking you or your work. They have the same goal as you: to make the manuscript stronger. Take their notes and feedback and – if you agree with what they had to say – apply them to a new draft of the manuscript. If you want (and I recommend), make the changes, then ask them to reread it.
All of this will aid in making your final draft stronger and more engaging to future readers.
Editing on a Budget
The good news: Editing services exist. The bad news: They can be rather pricey for an indie author on a budget. Some charge between $7 and $10 a page, which can be pretty expensive if you have a 500-page manuscript.
If you can do this, great. If you can’t, consider alternatives. I use Grammarly, which can help you with spelling, grammar, sentence structure, and other writing aspects to help improve your manuscript. It’s about $150 a year, and I have found it to be an invaluable tool in my writing process.
I copy and paste one chapter into the program and work through it slowly to make sure that what I want to say and how I want to say it is still in my voice, but that mechanical issues are resolved to make the writing clearer and more professional.
You can do this at any phase in the drafting process, but I did it between feedback drafts on Midnight House. It’s amazing how much we overlook when we are invested in the story. I highly recommend Grammarly as a writing tool.
Ready? Set? Publish?
Once you are satisfied with what you’ve written, your feedback partner has assisted with giving you notes to make the manuscript better, and you’ve done some fine-tuning to the entire work as a whole, it’s time to consider next steps.
I know I’m in a place where it’s time to move on when the story begins to fade from my mind. If I exhausted all story possibilities, my brain began to move on to other ideas and projects. This is a good thing. It means that you have done all you can for your story. You have given it all the attention it needed to be the best it can be.
It’s time to finalize things. If you are 100% satisfied with your manuscript, save it with “_FinalDraft” after the title.
Then, I would strongly urge you to get it copyrighted through the U.S. Copyright Office. It’s about $65, but you will have an official Copyright registration number, and your manuscript will be protected.
Your manuscript is done, finalized, and copyrighted. So, let’s get it on the road to publication. And next week, in the final post of this series, we’ll talk about the indie publishing process, marketing, and other aspects of getting your manuscript out in a professional form.
See you next week!
Below is another early review of Midnight House from Readers’ Favorite.
Reviewed By Foluso Falaye for Readers’ Favorite
Midnight House by Ian Dawson follows the story of Daniel that started in The Field. Two years after escaping his traumatic time in the field, Daniel decides to be physically prepared for such cases by exercising and taking self-defense classes. Although he still suffers from PTSD due to the experience, he finds it hard to get past it. As everyone around him, including his girlfriend (Amber), is concerned about his well-being, he must find ways to heal completely and stop the nightmares from coming. A new problem arises when his best friend (Kyle) gets invited by his school’s basketball captain (Luke) to partake in the Varsity team’s rituals as Luke has a questionable character. But how questionable is Luke, and can Daniel repay his best friend by saving him if it comes to that?
Three words: thrilling, suspenseful, and relatable. Midnight House is a perfect book for young adults as it involves several things that they experience, like first kisses, bullying, hazing rituals, building friendship, school sports, jealousy, and more. However, it gets very dark as some brutal fight scenes and plans for murder are portrayed in the plot. This adds to the thrill though; I was genuinely afraid that the protagonists might get killed or fall into the set traps. The story has a broad view, mainly shifting between four main viewpoints: Daniel, Amber, Kyle, and Luke. Prepare for some curse words and some graphic scenes, nothing sexually explicit though. All in all, there are no boring moments in Midnight House as it is very well put together. I would not hesitate to read other books by Ian Dawson.
Last week, I talked about my seemingly haphazard writing process. While I admit that this is how I generally operate, that is only in the beginning. When it comes to the actual task of writing, I take the job very seriously. It may take some time for me to sit down in front of the computer and begin the process, but I know – especially when it comes to my novels – that I am writing as professional as possible.
During the initial phases, it’s okay to be a little loose with your grammar, spelling, syntax, etc. But once you get past the rough/first draft phase, it’s time to hunker down and do the needed work to produce a professional product.
Let’s talk about the drafting process.
Don’t Try and Dodge the (First) Draft!
Rough drafts and first drafts are always pretty rough reads. But that’s a good thing. Why? Because you are now able to visually read your story on the page and see exactly what works, what doesn’t, where to add, where to cut, and where things actually work the first time.
You can’t edit what hasn’t been written, and this is now your chance to read through the draft and notate where things need to be changed, added, etc.
With Midnight House, this was my tactic. And the first draft was short, character arcs didn’t finish, the current opening didn’t exist, and there were missing elements that I knew had to be added ASAP.
And all of this takes time. And it should take time. It’s all part of the process.
I also tend to write multiple drafts of chapters/scenes then merge the strongest parts of these versions together. This, of course, can cause continuity issues if things aren’t fixed during the revision process. If Character A drives a Ford Mustang at the beginning of the story, you want to make sure they don’t suddenly drive a Dodge Charger later on because you wrote them driving a different car in a previous draft.
The urge will be strong to stop reading and start rewriting as you go, but be strong and keep reading and making notes about what you want to fix. That way, you have a clear picture of the entire story as it’s currently assembled.
Once you’ve done this, you can now take that trusty editing sledgehammer and demolish the pieces of your draft don’t work and rebuild them with stronger, more effective structures.
If at First You Don’t Succeed…
Writing a novel, a play, a screenplay, or a poem takes time. It takes patience. You won’t nail it 100% after your first rewrite, second, or even your sixth. With your story now fleshed out and in a tangible, malleable space, your creative brain is now firing on all cylinders 24/7, fixing plot holes, revising dialogue, enhancing description, and making you a better writer.
Once I’m into a story, I keep it top of mind. I work through the narrative in my head, figuring out issues and potential story problems. Figuring out new twists and ideas to enhance the suspense, the excitement, the humor. I have actually been on a walk at work and realized a significant plot hole existed and rushed back inside to email myself a potential fix to the problem.
Make sure that when you do begin a new draft, you date the draft in the filename to know that you’re working on the most current version. I didn’t do this on The Field, and it was a headache trying to track down the most recent version. Don’t be like me. Do something like The Field_DraftThree_02062018. Then each day you revise, you Save As… and change the date.
Take Your Time, and Take Some Time
As you complete each draft, give yourself some breathing room away from your story. Don’t worry; your brain won’t let you forget about it. This gives you some distance and objectivity regarding your story and will help you make harder decisions easier when editing. Sometimes it can be hard to let go of a favorite line of dialogue or a chapter that you love, even if it’s not working in a newer draft.
Giving yourself a week or two between rewrites can help refresh your mind and allow your brain to subconsciously identify story issues in the previous draft. Again, I’ve had this happen where I’m taking a break between drafts and realize that a chapter falls flat and needs to be cut.
Keeps notes on any changes, cuts, or additions you want to make, but don’t go back to start a new draft until you feel you have to dive back in.
The Writer Wears Many Hats
Once you are secure in what you have written and have a strong story containing all you want the reader to experience, it’s time to think like an editor. Yes, you want to pass your manuscript off to someone you trust to edit and give feedback, but you should be the first person who takes the initial pass as the manuscript’s editor.
You know what you want to say. You know what story you want to tell. The tone. The themes. The characters and their characterizations. Who better to go through and ensure that all of those things are 100% how they are intended to be? You are that person.
This is a systematic process. Take it one sentence at a time. Set small daily goals at first. Read through. Does everything in this paragraph make sense? Does it serve a purpose in the story? Does it deliver information about character or plot? Does each chapter move the story forward? Are there moments where things lag? Why? What’s the problem? How can it be fixed? Can that section be cut to tighten things up?
Remember, you are Editor now, not Writer. Your role here is to make sure things are clear for the reader as you want them to be. If you feel new content needs to be added, make a note of it and keep going.
I would like to also note that during this stage, cutting stuff is fine. Adding new stuff should wait until after this editing process is complete. That way, you know if what you think you need to add is redundant or even necessary as you progress through the story.
Midnight House has many characters involved in a lot of activities, so this was a great process to use multiple times to focus on each character. This ensured that their arcs were solid, that their interactions with other characters and story arcs worked, and continuity in their characterizations and dialogue (especially if parts of merged drafts were used) were consistent.
You’ve done it! Your hard work has paid off, and you now have a solid manuscript with a great story and characters. Congratulations!
Now it’s time to give your story to a new set of trusted eyes and get their feedback, input, and editing suggestions.
Next week, we’ll talk about getting feedback, finalizing your manuscript, and getting it ready to publish.
See you next week!